Brooke Ashlyn


Crumbling hope
Where do i start
Broken dreams
We are falling apart
Look in your heart
What you did was not very smart
Tears form in your eyes
As you look at the person you use to despise
Why couldn't you give life a chance
Why couldn't you just try
We live in misery
Life is just one big disguise
No one could see the lie's
No one could hear our cry's
Stuck in a place
Far from the human race
Just one more hope
One more dream
Before we become completely unseen

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 11, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 26, 2011

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  • Dylan Oppedahl (7/14/2009 5:19:00 PM)

    I love that one the most, great ending line

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