Immature Mind! Poem by kumar vishal

Immature Mind!

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Passing some days passing some years
do not let us know what's the fears,
have been lost in infancy trolls
with some chums nothing but rolls.

being unaware of planned events
what is in fate no worry and prevents,
brave enough to face up such
don't want further glitch much.

salad days are on let us feel
keep us away from life long deal,
one is subject to undertake these
so why worry and keep mind freeze

once aging maturity teaches lessons
so relaxed are we how strong treasons.

Immature Mind!
Sunday, October 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood,relaxed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 30 October 2016

Time and nature are the teacher, but we are the students....if we are fast enough to catch what is happening we wont be so bad to cope with trouble life tests and exam....real than any exam in the school...nice work Kumar. Happy deepavali/diwali to u and all there

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Vishal Kumar 31 October 2016

thanks soul!

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 October 2016

Growing up! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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