Immortal Night... Poem by hazem al jaber

Immortal Night...

Rating: 5.0


Immortal night...







in this serene poetic night...

under a moon and a star`s light...

soul got cohered...

and bodies were so close...

and every thing around was so poetic...

as we were into a dream...



feelings and longings were as a butterflies...

hearts flowed deeply over, with a volcano of love...

gave us, its powerful adorable night...



sweet dreamy girl...

i loved that night which we spent...

spent there into the heart of deeply darkly night...

and enjoyed together happen and felt it...

winds and its sounds and your perfume around us...

gave our hearts a reason to be hugged...

and to feel one the other so deeply as this deep night...

heard each others thoughts with no talks...

felt each others desires and whispers which runs into our minds...

deep silence into eyes and at faces...

but we read each others mind so clear...

and knew what the other needed...

needed a love to feel and to give...

finally...

night passed as a seconds...

beautiful seconds...

ended with a warm hug...

deep hug...

never had before...



by: hazem02@yahoo.com

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 21 July 2009

nice lyric poem, well penned with romantic ideas..10++++ from me

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Lalitha iyer 21 July 2009

Hope you dont end up your life with only poetry writing alone.........just a stuff of poetry....................

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Lady Grace 21 July 2009

in that poetic night where two poetic people talks under the sky of no clouds dreaming...dreaming... in that poetic night where unseen things above unspoken wrds of hearts unlock the door of love... your poem is as nice as that night night where poetic things are seen by two poetic people in love through their dreams...only a dream...

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a romantic poem..wishing you a thousand nights and a night as that night...

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