Impeccable Poem by Moses Rotimi

Impeccable

Rating: 5.0


She has this look that puzzles the heart,
Her mildness drives sensational heat through the spine,
She breaks through my defenses like through a park of card with the brilliant smiles on her face; she is so intriguing, so charming and so pretty.

She is a damsel, so beautiful to look upon.
I can't help fall for her type, she is so beloved. Bright and fair, elegant and cute.
Call her beauty; you'll be right, but she is more than that to me, she is my nirvana.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Okoye Charles Chukwudi 29 February 2012

Nice poem....mr lover boy...keep it up. Keep writing. Charley Charms

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 June 2011

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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