Impossible Poem by Jennifer Birchall

Impossible

Rating: 5.0


My insecurities show
Because you made me feel worthless
Now I'm trying as much as I can
To build a high tower
From grains of sand

Sunday, July 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 29 July 2019

Very effective sense of allegory and futility explained through sand, which without a water thicker will barely pile. Evocative and visible in its meaning.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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