That hurt, a pain never felt before
I think my heart is broken
Knowing I no longer have your love
The silence spoke like thunder
I knew it would happen so why am I sad
My tears are a waterfall flowing free
I'll wipe them with a heavy hand
Then I'll paint on a smile
I am sorry you have felt such sorrow and pain, a very well written poem
Deep feelings expressed with a wonderful command of language. A poignant bit of verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions...
Strong emotions are expressed in your poem. I sent you a message.
'The silence spoke like thunder' - an excellent expression. Loved your poignant poem.
My tears are a waterfall flowing free/I'll wipe them with a heavy hand....great expression emitting efficacious vibes! You have chosen a befitting title for this work on heartbreak! Well penned.....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So true how the silence can tear through us for years. Your poem made me feel strong emotion and to me that makes a great poem thank you.
Thank you so much for your kind words Tommy.