Silence Isn't Always Golden Poem by Jennifer Birchall

Silence Isn't Always Golden

Rating: 4.8


That hurt, a pain never felt before
I think my heart is broken
Knowing I no longer have your love
The silence spoke like thunder
I knew it would happen so why am I sad
My tears are a waterfall flowing free
I'll wipe them with a heavy hand
Then I'll paint on a smile

Saturday, November 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: break up,heartbreak,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Kane 24 November 2018

So true how the silence can tear through us for years. Your poem made me feel strong emotion and to me that makes a great poem thank you.

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Thank you so much for your kind words Tommy.

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Matthew Holloway 24 November 2018

I am sorry you have felt such sorrow and pain, a very well written poem

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Thank you Matthew.

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Gryny 24 November 2018

Sigh... Ive felt this Way too many times Thanks for the write.

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Chinedu Dike 14 July 2021

Deep feelings expressed with a wonderful command of language. A poignant bit of verse, very heartfelt with strong emotions...

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Amir Marandi 21 June 2020

Strong emotions are expressed in your poem. I sent you a message.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 February 2020

'The silence spoke like thunder' - an excellent expression. Loved your poignant poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 June 2019

My tears are a waterfall flowing free/I'll wipe them with a heavy hand....great expression emitting efficacious vibes! You have chosen a befitting title for this work on heartbreak! Well penned.....10

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Jane Campion 15 June 2019

This feels so real. It is what I do paint on a smile.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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