I Love You Still Poem by Jennifer Birchall

I Love You Still

Rating: 4.5


I love you still

I can't help it
I look at those perfect lips I used to kiss
Longing for one more
Your eyes captivating, piercing my soul
Feeling green eyed to my shame
The desire to stroke your beautiful face is strong
I yearn to gently caress your neck
I want to be close to smell you, oh that sweetest smell
I want to lie with you, simply holding hands
I crave your love
I love you

Sunday, November 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,heartbreak,longing,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 18 November 2018

I yearn to gently caress your neck I want to be close to smell you, oh that sweetest smell I want to lay with you, simply holding hands......the longingness of love. romance, desire, yearning of the heart. going to the extent of great fineness. tony

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Thank you Tony for your kind words it means a lot

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Matthew Holloway 18 November 2018

It's good Jen, well written

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Jennifer Birchall 29 November 2018

Thank you Matthew

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Annette Potgieter 21 November 2018

Your yearning for that one person is well captured.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2021

I can't help it I look at those perfect lips I used to kiss Longing for one more Your eyes captivating, piercing my soul................wonderful expression!

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Adeeb Alfateh 26 June 2019

I yearn to gently caress your neck I want to be close to smell you, oh that sweetest smell I want to lay with you, simply holding hands I crave your love I love you for the immortal love the mortal soul o in love......... lovely 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 June 2019

Wow! A sweet love poem! My favorite lines: " I want to lay with you, simply holding hands/I crave your love/I love you" . I invite you to read my poem 'The First Love' and provide your precise comments there! For this poem I vote 10/10

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Jane Campion 11 June 2019

There can be no deeper feeling in a poem. Absolutely magnificent. To my favorites.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 June 2019

Your eyes captivating, piercing my soul Feeling green eyed to my shame The desire to stroke your beautiful face is strong.. craving for your love. very good poem full of emotions. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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