Improve Upon Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Improve upon

I was amused to read
About how the bees were getting dead
After collection of some honey trips
I was aghast and could not keep smiling posture

Is the reward world gives for delivering good?
The medicinal product for all in neighborhood
Why is the nature so cruel for bees?
These were the questions roaming free in mind

The place is considered as three times holy
The sweetness can be divinely and wholly
The bees have honor of meeting heaven
After doing honey work for human

I gathered an impression
With confession
Those holy places have their own impact
Which shows result in each soul's act?

If we could be improved upon
After visiting such places and win the internal desires
For working toward charity or purity
I think that shall be the reward for journey