In A Crowded Room Poem by Steven Rodgers

In A Crowded Room

Rating: 4.8


When the clock stops ticking,
Drum beats cease to pound,
And the dance floor empties,
One cannot hear a sound,
It is in that moment when,  
Eyes locked in fervent gaze,
One fears to pose the question,
Is this, all of it a daze?

Hands melt together,
A heat unchecked by rain,
And pools of honey clog,
The forbidden passion drain,
The question asked again,
The answer now is clear,
Two hearts become one,  
And beat forever near. 

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 09 September 2012

Bravo! Sound like a typical New Yorker! This well crafted, poignant and romantic write clearly give you away by showing through your pen, the talent and lovely deep feelings! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up my brother! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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Valerie Dohren 09 September 2012

Sweet and romantic - a lovely write.

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