Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

In A Life As Chance - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Why such us madness and magnetic pull?
Why I try to act in haste and look fool?
Even though we both are to be blamed to the extent
What more is needed in the form of comments?

If simple logic is to be applied
Then nothing should be honestly replied
There are no specific words to elaborate
Enough of confusion prevails as how to start or state!

There is ample proof of attachment
One may always try to be closer and can’t afford to be absent
Some unknown string is pulled to cause eagerness
Some shy lines are drawn and visible on the face

Hesitation somewhere makes strong reaction
Enough of complaints to warrant immediate action
Promises to stay together and never to remain away
Exchange of sweet words and closeness in the way

This is how love can be interpreted!
Day is seen longer than expected
Nights are difficult to pass with dead silence
Nothing appeals as night stays longer at once

There is lot more to complain about and patch up
At one point come closer and very next “shut up”
Smile, hate, complaints all in one attempt
Lastly comes use of secret tear weapon intentionally kept

Nothing bad at all to love and to be loved
Whole of universe is for it and believed
Even we encourage it in all the forms
With the advent of times it automatically transforms

Almighty has gifted “love” cell in all human beings
Even if one wants to do away with it, he can’t bring
Love may surface in any other form to find the acceptance
It has to be loved and appreciated all the times hence

I wish the kingdom to last till the last
We may come up with move slow or fast
Yet there is strong feeling to have test at least once
Only fortunate people have it in life as chance


Comments about In A Life As Chance by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/10/2011 10:00:00 AM)


    [Love, live and learn: life is short]
    An excellent poem; ; ;
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/10/2011 8:13:00 AM)


    I wish the kingdom to last till the last
    We may come up with move slow or fast
    Yet there is strong feeling to have test at least once
    Only fortunate people have it in life as chance
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 10, 2011


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