Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 481,597 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

In Favor - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

In favor

Give single thought
For a minute
In favor
For major correction

We might have remained cruel
Not shown respect or spoken well
At least some fear has kept us away
From doing wrong in this path or way

Had there been no proof for His existence?
We could have taken every chance
For taking entire control over people
And made them to struggle

We could have gone even further
To make people weaker
Kept them under captivity
And hegemony

So the death weapon is created
The departure of life is clearly slated
No opinion is asked
But thrust upon and forced

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Comments about In Favor by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (12/11/2015 11:49:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem. Enjoyed the nuggets of wisdom in it's message. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/11/2015 7:57:00 PM)


    So the death weapon is created
    The departure of life is clearly slated
    No opinion is asked
    But thrust upon and forced
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2015



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