Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Rookie (August 28,1976 / Southern Oklahoma... )

In My Eyes - Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

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In My Eyes


In my eyes
You would see traces of wickedness
Outlines of solitariness
Amber flames of passion unleashed

In my eyes
You would see a salty sea
The waves would be dreadful
The black water inviting

In my eyes
You would see a haunting
Sinfully dark and foul
Many look away in fear

In my eyes
You would see a raging fire
Ablaze with stifled passion
Awaiting your tempting touch

In my eyes
If you look in them deeply
And not through them
You would see a promise of forever.



Copyright © 08-23-2007 Kristin Roth-Davis


Comments about In My Eyes by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/24/2007 8:56:00 PM)


    Inveterating read, Miss Kris! Vivid imagework, and a myriad display of passion and emotional accord & discord...Excellent delivery...smooth, crisp crafting...Another Grand Slam, my dear!

    Frankster/FjR
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 24, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 31, 2011


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