In My Womb Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In My Womb

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I had whole world in my womb
Happiness, worry, uncertainty all working like bomb
May soon explode to scatter the life's ambition
To put before the world my beautiful child for exhibition

I am breeding lovely and divine part
I shall hold it till the life lasts
Not to share it with any one
Except me and I alone

Oh what is this noise around me?
Why am I undergoing pain to feel free?
The new born is hitting me from inside
Just sliding down to come hastily and stay with my side

I loose control over self and go in silence
The baby has alighted in world and shown the presence
I have been informed of her arrival
With blood on body and spread over all

The cord has been cut
The baby is nicely put
My bond with her may last soon
Bodily separated but looks like a silver moon

'Look here' I am blessed with motherhood
Whole of the worlds know about it and rightly understood
What can be life without its attainment?
Lovely to feel in entire life with beautiful comments

Any mother may feel proud
When she can speak very loud
Of her and about beautiful child
To see nothing around as if being blind

Mothers are such and made of fine material
No one can opine differently and offer denial
She is very much inseparable part
Till we live long and finally depart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

I had whole world in my womb Happiness, worry, uncertainty all working like bomb

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 December 2012

Excellent! Pran Koul54 minutes ago Simple approach, great imagery and the bond is well addressed. Comment +2 simple and touching

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 December 2012

minoo cherian59 minutes ago very simple words woven together to reflect maternal love so well

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

james pizzimenti2 hours ago Put it all together i

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

james pizzimenti2 hours ago Put it all together i

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

A lot of profound writings james pizzimenti33 minutes ago Put it all together in verse

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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