In The Balance Poem by Paul Brookes

In The Balance

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Sweat on his brow was not returned monetarily,
if it was he'd be a wealthy man.

hands hardened, tough as his spirit,
dirt under his nails proclaimed him.
blue overalls pale from the many washings his badge of honour,
patches his medals.

striding, long legged across the fields to pick all day long,
sweet potatoes or beats, whatever was to harvest.

hard were the days but more the alone nights
itinerant and peripatetic he missed his kids
his sweet wife who made him the king of her heart

what is the worth of this man you ask
more than rubies or the riches of the earth.

for if a man is judged by his merit,
this humble man is rich indeed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 12 August 2021

Rich in description, very powerfully and exquisitely penned. A beautiful work of art...

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 August 2021

Great poem on a honest, hard working man.....Top stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 August 2021

Beautiful poem Paul. Wealth is not measured by riches but by deeds.

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