Musical Drips Poem by Paul Brookes

Musical Drips

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rains incessant
all morning falls
skies fifty shades of grey
the gutters overflow, a Niagara
dripping watery tunes
joy falls despite the rain.

Saturday, October 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: rain,weather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 10 October 2020

'joy falls despite the rain' - that's so good!

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 October 2020

The music of rain is so soothing to hear. Short and sweet poem. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Terry Craddock 15 October 2020

Rain A Joy For All Loving Water wet sodden in wind rain gift breath of life for plants roots wet rebirth the green joy found in rain showers in rain drops joy found in sun showers between showers joy in birth beautiful rainbows ribbon hues feel joy in life wet in gift grass moisture need not blister burn dry sun burning wither all vegetation heavily coated dripping rain Inspired by the poem 'Musical Drips' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 15 October 2020

Wet Days Worms Grubs Flooded Out Happy Duck Eaten wet sodden in wind rain is a human discomfort pain gift breath of life for plants a beautiful day for ducks roots wet rebirth the green worms grubs ducks eaten Inspired by the poem 'Musical Drips' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 15 October 2020

Burn Dry Shrivel Or Gift Moisture Grow feel joy in life in gift wet grass moisture need not blister burn dry sun burning wither vegetation heavily coated in dripping rain Inspired by the poem 'Musical Drips' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 15 October 2020

Joy In Birth Beautiful Rainbows Ribbon Hues joy found in rain showers in rain drops joy found in sun showers between showers joy in birth beautiful rainbows ribbon hues Inspired by the poem 'Musical Drips' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 10 October 2020

joy found in rain showers in rain drops, joy found in sun showers between showers, in birth beautiful rainbows ribbon hues, feels joy in the wet in gift grass moisture, need not blister burn in the dray nice lines Paul, enjoyed 'dripping watery tunes', it is a day of it here, all vegetation heavily coated rain wet sodden in wind rain

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