Monday, January 19, 2009

In The City Comments

Rating: ★4.0

Walking along these city streets
Seeing people busy
Pacing
Each with their own itinerary
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Jeremy Patnou
city Animals Angst
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Matthew C. L. Pratt 21 May 2009

Very well Structured, keept it up.

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 February 2009

Poems need a strong ending. The last three lines make this poem. Without those lines it is nothing but a recitation of city agony. I wasn't sure where the writer was going. I was relieved to read those lines. GW62

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Jeremy Patnou

Jeremy Patnou

Huntington Beach California
Jeremy Patnou
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Huntington Beach California
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