In The Midst Of A Strom Poem by Lakshmi Karat

In The Midst Of A Strom

Rating: 4.2


Her heart was bleeding..
I know this is only coz of me!
I know only me could heal her wound.
But how could I get wounded myself.
Now I feel the pain would be less
If I can bear it myself, hidden with my smile
I don’t know if I could get myself betrayed.
Else shall I let the pain revealed!
Then will it be worse? I am perplexed.
I don’t have a good vocabulary..
It seems you are getting bored.
But it is the same feeling with me
I could express with different words.
I always expect you would catch…
My sob, My tears, My pain, but you..
Always cling to your part!
But you make me strong and self driven.
I admit to my self, I am bit mad.
May you feel you were right or
May you leave this unnoticed…
What I did was always shown
In the midst of some storm!

Wednesday, February 4, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 06 February 2017

To conceive of life without difficulties is an existential absurdity. Storms appear and disappear as nothing is permanent besides change. A good piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Rakesh Bedi 11 July 2009

Well dear, storms just come and go; after testing human endurance!

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Catrina Heart 04 February 2009

such a poignant composition...i loved your last lines decribing yourself...10/10

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