In The Whispering Night Poem by Michael Burch

In The Whispering Night

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In the Whispering Night (I)
by Michael R. Burch

for George King

In the whispering night, when the stars bend low
till the hills ignite to a shining flame,
when a shower of meteors streaks the sky,
and the lilies sigh in their beds, for shame,
we must steal our souls, as they once were stolen,
and gather our vigor, and all our intent.
We must heave our bodies to some violent ocean
and laugh as they shatter, and never repent.
We must dance in the darkness as stars dance before us,
soar, SOAR! through the night on a butterfly's breeze:
blown high, upward-yearning, twin spirits returning
to the world of resplendence from which we were seized.

Published in Songs of Innocence and Romantics Quarterly. This is a poem I wrote for my favorite college English teacher, George King.

In the Whispering Night (II)
by Michael R. Burch

for George King

In the whispering night, when the stars bend low
till the hills ignite to a shining flame,
when a shower of meteors streaks the sky,
and the lilies sigh in their beds, for shame,
we must steal our souls, as they once were stolen,
and gather our vigor, and all our intent.
We must heave our husks into some savage ocean
and laugh as they shatter, and never repent.
We must dance in the darkness as stars dance before us,
soar, SOAR! through the night on a butterfly's breeze,
blown high, upward yearning,
twin spirits returning
to the world of resplendence from which we were seized.

In the whispering night, when the mockingbird calls
while denuded vines barely cling to stone walls,
as the red-rocked rivers rush on to the sea,
like a bright Goddess calling
a meteor falling
may flare like desire through skeletal trees.

If you look to the east, you will see a reminder
of days that broke warmer and nights that fell kinder;
but you and I were not meant for this life,
a life of illusions
and painful delusions:
a life without meaning—unless it is life.

So turn from the east and look to the west,
to the stars—argent fire ablaze at God's breast—
but there you'll find nothing but dreams of lost days:
days lost forever,
departed, and never,
oh never, oh never shall they be regained.

So turn from those heavens—night's pale host of stars—
to these scarred pitted mountains, these wild grotesque tors
which—looming in darkness—obscure lustrous seas.
We are men, we must sing
till enchanted vales ring;
we are men; though we wither, our spirits soar free.

This is the original version of 'In the Whispering Night' and one of my most Romantic poems, if not *the* most Romantic. I wrote the poem in my teens, my freshman year of college, for my favorite English teacher and fellow poet, George King.

Keywords/Tags: dance, dancing, flash, flight, heaven, hill, hills, night, nightfall, ocean, ocean waves, mountain, mountains, romantic, romanticism, kin, kinship

Friday, January 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: mountain,mountains,romantic,romanticism,kinship,dance,dancing,flash,flight,heaven,hill,night,nightfall,ocean,ocean waves
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

And this poem is an exquisite ode to a marvellous beloved teacher

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Beautifully crafted. I would love to hear set to music and rendered in the voice of the writer, he should be a fantastic singer.

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Kingsley Egbukole 10 January 2020

Nice articulated. Interesting reading. Thanks for sharing

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Michael Burch 23 January 2020

Thanks, I'm glad you liked my poem.

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