In This Cool Morning Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

In This Cool Morning

Rating: 5.0


When the sound of birds
From the tree tops is not
Heard in the morn
I can feel from this life
Happiness in gone

When flitting clouds do
Not reflect the sunlight
Giving a golden glow
I wake up with a heavy
Heart and feel low

When swinging buds do
Not open up shedding a
Sweet fragrance
I won't like to get up
But lie in silence

When across the dales the
Cold wind does not tarry
And sing a song
I feel in this cool morning
Something is wrong

Wednesday, December 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 December 2018

yes lovely poem but imagine mine I woke up this morn no sun was born clouds stood anchored in the sky but can anyone tell me why the snows were loaded like coal on a truck overloaded neither the truck moves back nor forward no birds whistled no not a sound all about me were sleeping sound bang the door did someone are you all dead asked a voice 'tis 1 pm

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 December 2018

That is really a great comment. Much appreciated.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2018

I appreciate the spirit of this poem! Well penned....10

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 December 2018

Thank you very much Sir for appreciation. Gratitude.

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