Here I'M Alone Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Here I'M Alone

Rating: 4.8


I don’t know why I like to talk with you
In your language
Why I can’t withdraw my fingers from the keys
Till I finished the page

Why do I always fall prey to your childlike charm
And believe your words
When I see you staring at me from inside the glass
My thoughts collapse as a tower of cards

The scratch you left on the surface of my heart
Has grown wide to touch the mind
Your lies and betrayal still haunt me like ghosts
Though much I try to leave them behind

Your questions have no answers with me
And you ask them so often
I tried and failed to come out from web of love
That around me you have spun

Know I well I won’t ever get you, and your love
Is not in my fate
You better find love with someone who stays near you
Before it would be too late

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susheela Shiju 13 January 2019

beautifully penned! 10+++

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 January 2019

Thanks for giving time. Gratitude.

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One to whom love is denied will feel lonely. The poet's attempt to bring the fact to light is successful. " Know I well I won’t ever get you, and your love Is not in my fate" separate words. So touchingly you have written....10

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 March 2019

Thanks very much Sir for reading and giving wonderful comment. Feeling inspired.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2019

love and love through the life, entire life drives a feeling of loneliness in crowd /// beautiful poem

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me poet yeps poet 13 May 2021

5 stars u love a frsh one for every date why for another fresh bottle wait updatemate

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 December 2020

The scratch you left on the surface of my heart Has grown wide to touch the mind Your lies and betrayal still haunt me like ghosts Though much I try to leave them behind. Great expressions on the reality of love. a fine poem. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2020

Why do I always fall prey to your childlike charm And believe your words When I see you staring at me from inside the glass My thoughts collapse as a tower of cards wonderful poetic expressions my dear poet Tiku. to ny

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Sachidananda Panda 26 July 2020

Repentance and rejection... move together, hand in hand... a beautiful poem... Thanks

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Rajendran Muthiah 22 June 2020

The lover gives up his love and wishes that she should marry someone who is more suitable. That is great.

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