In Vein Of Pablo Neruda's Poem With Due Apology Poem by me poet yeps poet

In Vein Of Pablo Neruda's Poem With Due Apology

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Remember just one thing
Should you forget every moment of my life
I sacrificed for you,
the scooter rides
the car drives
the walks to the club the mall and back

your security every moment to moment
was always upper most in my mind
as always was and will be
but remember this
should you feel the age
the deafness
the disgust and frustration deeply sunk
then remember this
ere you even think of forgetting me
I shall be lost by thee
lost into the wilderness
where you can never find me
then only you will know
what and whom you have lost

Penniless
homeless
striving on the streets
of a no man's land
you will find thyself

I will be no where
to caress
gone with the whistling wind
I will be far from thy remembrance
into the wildest of wilderness
man made as your own creation

You will find hollowness
when I am nowhere now around
your security unfound.

But should you continue to love me
as before
Know this I will still be at your beck and call
the fragrance of life
the sweetness of nectar
my Love will still be yours

just remember this
I am born for thee
So Love me....

In vein Of Pablo Neruda's poem

Wednesday, July 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: couple,love,loyalty,marriage,wife
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 11 September 2017

In Vein of Pablo Neruda's poem- - - - -It really is an amazing poem of love- - - - 'Remembering' is closeness we experience even when one is miles away from his beloved and 'forgetting 'is drifting away from each other- - If love evaporates from one''s heart he/she will lose the beloved'', the security that comes when one feels loved or when lover is around.But true love is always a sweet presence, always ready to sacrifice for love.To quote from the poem- - - But should you continue to love me as before Know this I will still be at your beck and call the fragrance of life the sweetness of nectar my Love will still be yours just remember this I am born for thee So Love me....

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 October 2018

much belated thanks I just came by reading my poems those i haven't yet replied so help me sigh!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2017

True love is love for ever. It may be quoted... Know this I will still be at your beck and call the fragrance of life the sweetness of nectar my Love will still be yours just remember this I am born for thee So Love me.... Beautiful poem having euphonious depiction. I appreciate this...10 Thanks.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 September 2017

such a bagsfull of kindness coming from the bestest poethere bring in my joyful tears thanks poet sir

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