What surprising trees,
they were
Even deep shadows
were charing
What an earth that was
sliding beneath the feet
precarious dimensions
making the vision blurred
A desolated place...
Perhaps it was
the end of space
or the begining
of timelessness?
I feel an eternity unravelling in these lines...deep thoughts, well written...
ufff...marvellous, marvellous...a very strong use of metaphor and written in the way i adore most....your writng style is excellent ma'am and i hope i'll read other works soon too...thanks 10++++ and A+++..collected rgds asif
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What an earth that was sliding beneath the feet precarious dimensions making the vision blurred....................awesome write 10/10