Thursday, January 6, 2011

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my soul is tormented
with a lil bit of agony
and a lil bit of despair
it's been so long since i stepped outside
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Pranesh Varan
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Jean Dament 06 January 2011

There does seem to be a sadness surrounding us these days; as your poem indicates. I guess we are all feeling oppressed. I noticed this at Christmastime; as the joy & spirit of Ch just wasn't there this year. We can each do our part though in trying to be cheerful; as one person can make a difference. Thanks for sharing. A well written & insightful poem. Spiritsong

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