Indebted To Nation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Indebted To Nation

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You only look back
If something id at stake
Choose only right course
It is needed of course

If you are at the top of world
Nothing should be told
Neither about achievement
Nor about critical movement

You are passing through
With favorable wind to view
World through your eyes
With different angle and tries

It pays in good dividend
Turns foes into friends
Nothing goes against
Your are considered as best

You are known in circle
You have waged struggle
Now time has come to assess
What was crucial phase?

Look not back
If that is for name sake
You are on right position
With nothing in question

Stay for noble cause
Have little rest or pause
Think more about their plight and condition
Whole of the population is indented to you and nation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

Some good lines Bod hisattva4 minutes ago Some good lines some bad, quirky use of repetition at start got my interest but this wavered as it felt a little stale as it progressed. probably better in structure and meter than my own but lacked character.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

Interesting Mandi DietzLess than a minute ago Abstract but understandable Comment +1 Awesome

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

Young IzzyLess than a minute ago I like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 September 2013

You only look back If something id at stake

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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