Inner Beauty Poem by Hiteishi Jayswal

Inner Beauty

Rating: 5.0


She felt bad when she didn't win in sports,
Classmates bullied her as she was a fatso,
Being an average in academics added to her misery,
Not being a hottie, she regretted,
She believed that her crush was way out of her league,
Because he was tall, handsome, dude and great basketball player.
She lived in her little world of her fantasy novels.
One day whilst crying, she ran to her grandma.
She made her realise that,
The beauty of people is inside their hearts and not looks,
People who go through all the adventures of life with smile on face are the real sports person,
Marks of some academics doesn't describe who you are,
It's okay to be an average student unless your marks are too bad,
Being slim and fit doesn't make you a good person,
We have just one life, don't waste it worrying about your calories,
Having sweet heart matters the most.
Loving yourself is one of the greatest achievements,
Always look at yourself as a positive person.
If you want a partner,
Choose someone who accepts you as you are!

Inner Beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Simha 23 March 2018

A great poem and straight on point, no confusions and complexity like in Shakespeare's. But compose with a proper rhyming scheme as it plays a key role in arising interest. Anyway, this is a great poem. Please read my poems especially The Dark Wonders, and comment your true opinion. Thanks.

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Hiteishi Jayswal 23 March 2018

Thank you so much for your honest feedback. It means a lot.

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Hiteishi Jayswal 23 March 2018

Thank you so much sir for your honest feedback...! !

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Hiteishi J. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Hiteishi Jayswal 23 March 2018

Thank you so much..

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Shakil Ahmed 19 March 2018

I enjoyed reading the poem, well-penned, thanks

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Hiteishi Jayswal 19 March 2018

Thank you! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

Bullying is so sad and thought provoking. Not wining in sports is not a big issue. Giving support to others is wise and a duty of humanity. Inner values and kindness carry beauty of attitude. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned...10

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Hiteishi Jayswal 19 March 2018

Thank you sir! !

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