Winter's Last Rose Poem by Dominic Windram

Winter's Last Rose

Rating: 4.8


Winter's last rose; rose of regret:
O how once your radiant beauty
Shimmered in summer's potent hour.
Now your faded petals offer,
Only a glimpse of that power.

Now diamond points of ice cruelly
Surround your flesh pink, Christ like presence.
The whine of winter's bitter song;
The cold claws of grief; the grey silence:
The landscape scorns its chosen one.

Neglected rose; rose of regret.

Winter's Last Rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 16 April 2020

Well done Dominic! Salutations to you sir on being chosen as Member Poem of the Day. You thoroughly deserve this accolade for another superbly written and deserving poem. A truly beautiful poem written from a true poet's heart. Stay well and healthy good sir and all the loved ones around you. And may God Bless and Keep you all.

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Soran M. H 07 June 2020

How pleased am I, and I feel as if I wrote it.. The last winter rose; A rose of remorse: it is considered a form of another meaning, it can be applied to the whole life, so your poems live without dying because they are out of space and time, well done for this wonderful work..10/10

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Dominic Windram 08 June 2020

Thanks so much Soran....I always try my best!

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Shaun Cronick 19 May 2020

I'm in the neighbourhood Dominic and while I'm here I believe with all conviction, your poem thoroughly deserves another 10. So why not. I'm off to the Land of Nod for the Sandman calleth me and duty calls tomorrow. Will read/rate more of your fine writing tomorrow eve'. Take care and good luck on your early mentioned venture.

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Dominic Windram 20 May 2020

Thanks Shaun. I always appreciate your kind comments.

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 26 April 2020

Very good ?? 10++++++

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Dominic Windram 26 April 2020

Thanks Mary... God bless you!

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The Crow 25 April 2020

I luv you the best poet on this site by far. Judith thinks so too but she is thinking about another memorandum.

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Chinedu Dike 16 April 2020

We articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Dominic.

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Dominic Windram 17 April 2020

Thanks Ronnie and Chinedu...hope you are both keeping well. Stay safe!

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