Inner Realm__ No Life Poem by Prabir Gayen

Inner Realm__ No Life

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Inner Realm
_ No Life _
A vast desert without oasis,
A valleywide spread without blossom,
A river without water my heart,
Without dream to fill the gap of life.
The day thou artgone I am nowhere.
With thy departure as April shower,
I am nobody with no mind within.
Thou hast come in my mind as dream sweet,
Showed kaleidoscopic view of life.
Thou art the song unuttered, that blessed,
And made life go without Contention.
Under the empty vault of my heart,
Thou wert a fresh valley of flower.
Sometimes joy and sometimes full of tears,
Sometimes a pain poignant that coup my being.
A boat without board and sky without Stars.
Thou art gone knocking my being with speech.
Life is a mystic sound with no drum.
The sound within sound having no dream.
With Sudden blow, with no real quick corn.
Upon thy breast i laid my life best,
With time to mature, to the fullest form.
Now with song tuneless I am on shore,
To view the colour of hope of life,
Once I wished to touch with my elate being.
In a lonesome noon thou hast left me,
To roll with time to suffer no life.

Inner Realm__ No Life
Tuesday, October 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ayan Mondal 29 May 2020

Once I wished to touch with my elate being. In a lonesome noon thou hast left me, To roll with time to suffer no life.

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 October 2018

Life is a mystic sound with no drum. The sound within sound having no dream. With Sudden blow, with no real quick corn. Upon thy breast i laid my life best, a very fine poem trying to express the inner being., the ache of the mind, the desert sans Oasis........ thank u dear poet for your creative thinking going into the mysterious level.. thanku. again. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2018

A vast desert without oasis provokes thought. Sometimes joy and sometimes sadness makes mind full of tears. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

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Prabir Gayen 16 October 2018

I expected a comment particularly for this poem Thanks for your sweet pain to comment on this short, tiny ache of my mind.

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