Raju Baruah

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***inside The Aquarium*** - Poem by Raju Baruah

Dreams are under colored Water
Beautiful stone
Artificial wave creates the orchestra of schematic life

Crystal eyes of yellow night
Making a shadow over the moon light breeze

Hours are panic and fragile
In side the Aquarium

Still we are happy with the silver screen
We honored our crescendo sin

Running like a clock
Can't go beyond limitation
Can't reach the hip.

(c) raju baruah'2010


Comments about ***inside The Aquarium*** by Raju Baruah

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (4/15/2010 5:13:00 AM)


    Crystal eyes of yellow night
    Making a shadow over the moon light breeze
    ......

    Mysterious too. If got the opportunity to experience it......
    Yes, you are in poetry. Run long, feel much, write less...........

    Apoet
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  • (4/12/2010 2:46:00 AM)


    a wonderful microcosm of life, this aqarium! (Report) Reply

  • (4/12/2010 1:01:00 AM)


    Running like a clock
    Can’t go beyond limitation
    Can't reach the hip.

    are you describing the human race in those lines? they are mostly within limitations which makes them normal, clever, smart and ignorant.

    nice write.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 11, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 11, 2012


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