Instant Poem by Lola Sanchez

Instant

Rating: 5.0


Confined within these walls
wanting to break free
trying to scratch my way out

Listening to droning voices
talking about molecules
indigestion and digestion
Releasing stomach acids
breaking the bonds of molecules
Just add water

Instant freedom
complete with rebellion and battle
Just add water
To break away from structure
to break free from similar groups
to initiate a reaction
Just add water

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 10 November 2018

break away from structure to break free from similar groups to initiate a reaction Just add water..Water as a symbol. a very nice poem dear poetess. tony

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 01 September 2008

deep thought, thanks for sharing

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rajagopal haran 07 November 2007

powerful use of water; great poem Lola

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Lungelo Mbatha 25 June 2007

i can feel the 'chemistry' in this piece.... CheerS!

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Lola Sanchez

Lola Sanchez

Pretoria, Gauteng South Africa
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