Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 698,713 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Internal Conscious - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Internal conscious

Why am I in this world?
Nothing was told clearly
I probed more into it
But failed to fetch anything

Was I to eat happily?
And stay merrily
As God has given enough to last comfortably
I sincerely thanked an almighty

My mind hunted more
I had to explore
But found its answer from nowhere
I had to dare afresh

No, no
Mind revolted to go further
Yet I asked the same thing to internal conscious
That inspired real trust

I was to live as others did
But nothing was to be done to hide
The approach towards poor and need was overhauled
Now I was not misled

I brushed off the fear
And ventured to go far
It was now clear with vision
There remained no more confusion

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  • (10/23/2017 11:46:00 PM)

    it must be compassion the axis of this life for all.. a self searching poem. excellent sir.. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2017 11:15:00 PM)

    I brushed off the fear
    And ventured to go far
    It was now clear with vision
    There remained no more confusion
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 23, 2017



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