Jessica Canerday

Into My Eyes - Poem by Jessica Canerday

You took me by surprise
when I stared into your eyes
making me see
how you can be
beyond the mask and fancy clothes
beyond the friends who are actually foes
beyond the money and the fame
you're just like me we're both the same
I wish that you could only see
into my eyes the way I can be

Comments about Into My Eyes by Jessica Canerday

  • (4/3/2006 7:06:00 PM)

    The expression in this is both open and honest and you have done very well in my opinion.Love Duncan (Report) Reply

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  • (4/3/2006 6:33:00 PM)

    I agree with Roy the and isnt necessary though its a good poem. (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2006 6:00:00 PM)

    You do not need the and in the last line. Take care Roy. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 3, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 4, 2006

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