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Into My Eyes

Rating: 4.5

You took me by surprise
when I stared into your eyes
making me see
how you can be
beyond the mask and fancy clothes
beyond the friends who are actually foes
beyond the money and the fame
you're just like me we're both the same
I wish that you could only see
into my eyes the way I can be

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Duncan Wyllie 03 April 2006

The expression in this is both open and honest and you have done very well in my opinion.Love Duncan

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Sarah Abdul 03 April 2006

I agree with Roy the and isnt necessary though its a good poem.

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Roy Storey 03 April 2006

You do not need the and in the last line. Take care Roy.

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