Tuesday, November 12, 2019

Intoxicated Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Intoxicated kiss activated from pore to pore
In the process I was no more and she was no more
In that state of ecstasy many venues to explore
Every beautiful part was wonderful to explore
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2019

Her eyes were shimmering with light so pink/What a love call was to blink and to sink....Intoxicating expression! A wonderful romantic poem..........................................Full marks

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 November 2019

So intoxicated, so one-minded, talking about it (the kiss) the whole stanza took the same rhyme. Lovely.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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