Introspection Comments

i really like thisone cause its true w cant look i side or past the front of any one any more cause we are afraid of whats on the inside

Your poem is right, most people can't see what really matters. I like this one as well.

A really powerful piece with such strong use of language, almost in a form of a casual conversation wrapped with talent that has turned it into a beautiful poem :) Be great if you could give some honest comments about one of my new pieces, preferably 'Immediate Peril' Thank you :)