Invisable To You. Poem by Emily Reid

Invisable To You.



.You know I'm there and yet I feel so invisible. My eyes cry everyday for you, my heart screams out to you. No one understands, and I feel so alone all the time. I wish you understood, I wish you really cared. I'm just so scared and as the darkness creeps in I no longer feel you around, my heart stops beating, I can't live without you. I can't fight these feelings I have deep inside for you. I'm invisible to everyone and barely anyone cares, the darkness is coming again. My heart is slowly breaking piece by piece and rain is poring from my eyes. Your everything to me and I'm all alone in the dark again. The rain's coming down harder, my cheeks are soaked and there's nothing I can do. As long as your happy, then I guess a part of me is too. My heart is broken and it seems like it always will be. Why is it that I see you in everything that I do? Why is it that every sad dong reminds me of you? I think it's because your stuck in my heart and my heart won't let you go. Every time I close my eyes, your there, even in my dreams you appear. So how come your in my life so much and yet I'm completely invisible to you? I know that you could maybe care but how long do I have to wait for you to realize that I've cared all along. I feel like I'm drifting away. I'm reaching out to you, I'm calling you name, but you just keep walking and never seem to notice I'm there. I've been here all along, I've been waiting for you. I see you in the halls each day and you just pass me by. You don't even realize what I'm holding onto inside. Everyone's telling me to just let go, but my heart just doesn’t know... If we were together, would it be like in my dreams? Would you hold me close or kiss me in the rain? Now, I'll never know and you can't know how I feel so what's the point? …

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tyease Collins 31 August 2009

A tip: you should make the poem into stanzas and not just type it all together. It kinda confuses the reader a lot. Well it confused me. But overall....i really love the emotion that you put into your poetry. iT's most appreciated: ] -Ellie

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