Invisible Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Pain is always invisible as a person`s inside.We propose our pains to persons we like and appreciate and may be we do not get in the affirmation as always as an acknowledgment.Then we are lucky.Then only pains though visible finds a life of panacea.Otherwise life`s saga needs to be drunk painlessly.In the valley of those mountains somewhere where pains in tears will find a way away from life.Nobody will know.Nobody then is supposed to.Well expressed thoughts here.

There is perhaps something very 'deeply' mystical about this. The use of words like, 'Valley', 'Enflamed' and 'eat your own pain' aggregates to a selfish personality content on harming oneself even though, 'the love does grow like the rest of you'. It is perhaps a reminder to all to do unto others what u want others to do onto you. For a young poet, your choice of words are rich and on a different levels shows how deep your thought process goes plus your perception and connection to the world. You keep it concise and rich and your expressions brings forth a dynamic and changing world. thanks for sharing. Genuine talent 10/10

Beautiful words and the expression is marvelous.

Boom...it just a splash of your emotion here...burned and true...this like give a smack to the readers to open the eyes and have good nod! it was good write! ! _Unwritten Soul