Is Evil Thy Name? Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

Is Evil Thy Name?



He gazes at her… transfixed by her untaintedness.
The lustrous glow from her sable eyes drawing him into the promised profoundness of her innocent spirit.
Fantasising how eventually she will subjugate to him andwillingly acquiesceto his suddenoverwhelming desire to possess her.
All reason reduced to manly gratification, he blindly stumbles on.
A languid introduction, palm outstretched, his sweat making contact with her gelid hand
sends an unexpected shiver reverberating through his body….
Strange..but exciting.
She smiles a radiant smile, through parted lips, showing a glimpse of even, white teeth -like jewelled nacre.
Her eyes discreetly lower, he perceives it as shy modesty which she displays so naturally.
He feels in control, vigorous and mighty.
His conscience slowly ebbing as he consigns to oblivion the wedding vows made before God.
He must have her…….
She saw him enter the room, a fatigued, spiritless soul.
A hollow Godforsaken being, looking to instill some fire into his bromidic life.
A once kindly man, but now defeated, with failure resting heavily on his dejected shoulders,
Such a willing candidate……..
Her eyes deep as pitch and fiery as brimstone, looked into his closed soul and she smiled her smile-
irascible and mocking, but to a weak subject -radiant and alluringly shy.
All too easy….. another conquest…her master will be pleased.
He holds her look and whilst caressing her cool, velvety hand -asked her name…
She feel victorious, proud, and vanquished all his qualms, as in a silken, beguiling voice
She spoke the name that would be his downfall.
‘I'm Lucy' she said ‘ LucyFerr' so pleased to meet you……

Is Evil Thy Name?
Saturday, October 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: evil,seduction,weakness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
evil is always looking for candidates.....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 29 December 2017

i shall put this now into my/our January 2018 showcase, by and for PH poets. if you are unfamiliar with the showcases, just ask me about them. your name shall be mentioned twice. i may also make note of some typos which PH may have made in your poem. (to be continued) .... bri

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Bri Edwards 07 December 2017

I especially enjoyed: Her eyes deep as pitch and fiery as brimstone, looked into his closed soul and she smiled her smile- irascible and mocking, but to a weak subject -radiant and alluringly shy. Where can i hook up with her? ? ? Bri :)

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Bri Edwards 07 December 2017

I am using tablet so shaĺl be brief. Some words i don't know, but will not look up. Instil or instill? Some inconsistency in verb tenses i think, near ending. BUT a 'LOVELY' story. To MyPoemList.

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