It 362 Poem by Ari Alsio

It 362

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The sacrifice
requires a white spring
cranes screaming

Wednesday, November 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 15 November 2015

hmmmm..it could be busy constructions which spews too much dust in spring

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Ari Alsio 15 November 2015

very well could be, dust and construction, the construction is always a little busy

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Rahman Henry 04 November 2015

wonderfully penned Haiku, dear poet!

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Ari Alsio 04 November 2015

I am looking for depth and time it was created, thanks to my dear brother.

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