I liked the last stanza of your poem. The preceding stanzas being a kind of fun, the last one ends in a sad note. That makes it a good poem- the contrast.
I wonder if the words 'Felt Out' in the title should be 'Fell Out', as the text of the poem suggests.
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I liked the last stanza of your poem. The preceding stanzas being a kind of fun, the last one ends in a sad note. That makes it a good poem- the contrast. I wonder if the words 'Felt Out' in the title should be 'Fell Out', as the text of the poem suggests.