It Happened... At Shurijo (Shuri) Castle Poem by M.J. Daniels

It Happened... At Shurijo (Shuri) Castle

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One day,
we walked,
on the sidewalk,
Mom screams,
I freeze,
Sister,
walks past it,
without noticing,
Marines scared.
There infront of us was a
dark,
mysterious,
a four foot long snake.
We ran as fast as we could
never to return again,
(until a month later) .

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
June Feir-Cruz 31 July 2009

I love that it made me revited and wanted to read how it was to end...you're a good raconteur. Bravo! !

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Shekhar Joshi 30 July 2009

good one....nicely written... ;)

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Scarlette Romero 30 July 2009

nice..very interesting story

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