Daddy Poem by M.J. Daniels

Daddy

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Daddy I miss you
Daddy I love you
Daddy I adore you

Though you are in Iraq
I can't wait 'till you come back.

It's been so long,
the feeling i have inside
it feels so wrong.

Even though you have been gone a lot.
You, are on
my every thought.

I want to hug you
Hold you,
and squeeze you tight
Every time I go to bed
I want to look at you and say,
'good night.'

I miss you Daddy,
yes I do.
I love you Daddy
I certainly do.

I want to wake up
and you'll be there.
I'll say, 'Love you Daddy! '
and you'll say
'I love you to,
Jazzy-Bear.'

I still miss you Daddy,
that you understand.
But you'll be surprise
all the fun stuff,
we have planned.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hebert Logerie Sr. 30 July 2009

Keep writing, I hope that your daddy return safely soon.

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Poetic Soul 30 July 2009

Well written, heartfelt.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 July 2009

As a child, it is quite natural to crave for father's presence, particularly at bed time. Very nicely written.

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this is so good n nice written so go read some of my poems

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 01 August 2009

i loveeee this poem it feels so longing and full of such warm love a great write^^

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 August 2009

Daddy I miss you Daddy I love you Daddy I adore you Though you are in Iraq I can't wait 'till you come back. deep emotions from daughter to father.. good poems....10 read mine...papado u know and papa u too.. along with o, mother

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beautiful. i would pray he gets back safe.

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June Feir-Cruz 31 July 2009

One word: Ohhhh....that is so sweet. I hope your father comes back safely.

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