It Hurts To Live! Poem by Becky Ginn

It Hurts To Live!

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I’m really badly hurting
Sharp pains keep shooting though my whole body.
I don’t know what to do.
Cause the pain is so unbearable

I’m breathing in trying to ease it but nothings working.
Why did I do it?
Why did I tell?
I thought it would help.

I cant believe I broke down I have never done that before
I’m so weak
He said we need to talk but don’t he understand it hurts to talk
It hurts to move
It hurts to live

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noha Ramzy 19 April 2006

Becky this poem realy maded me cry, i think you are going through a lot of pain but i tell you don't ever give up, u still young and you have the whole life in front of you, know that this pain will not last forever and surely there is a reason for your life, so all i tell you is be patient and please have hope, trust me things will be better. and lovely poem been wroted here well done becky with my respect thanks

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