It Is Incomplete Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

It Is Incomplete

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it is incomplete

You are weather woman
But I am strong wind man
Blow you always with breeze and air
Always with you and very near

You need me even if say no
Life has to be passed on or go
In smooth way and very much ascertained
Its dignity and honor has to be maintained

You take on me
As you are free
I am the one for you
To be precise and very rue

You may predict
But I certainly insist
You got to be inclined
As I have got you and defined

I like you in any form and accept
Whether child, wife or imaginations kept
It is my intention to feel you fulfilled
Keep in happiness and smiled

You may hide many things
But my eyes may miss nothing
It can read your aspirations
That is the way to build permanent relation

Be on my side and move on
Hearts are delicate to be won
We can move on hand in hand
To be on safe side even as friend

I want you to be my woman
As I am also human
It may be worthwhile
If you prefer to side with and walk for miles

You are free to venture
And think about future
But mind one thing about life
It is incomplete without being wife

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 March 2013

Lorraine Currelley and Jane Lynahan Karklin like this. Lorraine Currelley There is always gentleness, compassion, passion, love and a sweet innocence in many of your poems. Thank you, for sharing! 4 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 March 2013

Narendra Rai likes this. Narendra Rai First starting lines found with a jolt and jumped, quite imagery beautiful metaphor used: You are weather woman But I am strong wind man Blow you always with breeze and air Always with you and very near====== 3 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 March 2013

Some Girl Yes, true love should end in marriage, nice poem and I like the tone of the expression, honest. I agree that open minded relationships are incomplete, can lead to uncertainty and destruction Alyssa Womack11 minutes ago I think I like your poetry, but I have a hard time understanding what you're saying. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago flow with contents.. poetry all about sentiments and little intention of grasping +1: ( Nick Adegwe-Oshomah5 minutes ago Quite nice Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 March 2013

it is incomplete You are weather woman But I am strong wind man

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