Sunday, August 13, 2017

It Is Raining Today Comments

Rating: 4.5

Scanty or plenty
Could be summed up fairly
Discriminating the day's full or measured
With days past adored and cared
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Susan Williams 31 December 2017

Rain without cloud is implausible And cloud without rain is futile - - - - - - - - - - - - -What a perfectly framed closing couplet! ! ! You are such a fine writer, Deepak. I look forward to reading more and more of your work, my friend! ! ! 10+++++++++++++

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Many many thanks........Susan........I am humbled

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Deepak. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Many many thanks Jazib.......wish you all the best

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