Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 413,157 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

It May Create - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Go with conscious
And remain continuous
In approach
As such

Never bother
Or offer
Any explanation
As it clouds the relation

You are not here to show
And go
Along with the wishes of people
And finish

Love can never be hidden
Or laden
With conditions
Else it may create confusion

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Comments about It May Create by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2015 8:09:00 AM)


    Nice and to the point :)
    6 hours ago by Franceous Bristol to It may create
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  • (9/8/2015 2:49:00 AM)


    Very true words you have written here, love can never be hidden! It must be an unconditional love, not tied by many strings and demands. It must of necessity, be free to love, then it will be fulfilled completely in both people. Great poem, I love it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2015 1:21:00 AM)


    Love can never be hidden
    Or laden
    With conditions
    Else it may create confusion
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 8, 2015



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