It Makes Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
It Makes
It makes difference
If availed chance
With two beautiful women
Not good sign or omen
Even though one may love
Others may be surely trying to resolve
In her favor the golden love
To make her happy and believe
If I take it as mere symbol
Two natural objects can make call
Try to attract and make an appeal
Then it may look really real
Sun and moon is loved object
Both have different temperament in fact
One is so hot with lots of energy
Another is cool with light silvery
If two women can make you hot and cool
Take it simple way that you are fool
If this can lead to memorable poetry
I shall surely bow my head to an almighty
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Title should be sun and moon but good enough Jeremiel Cook3 hours ago Almost like a Tarot-innovation type poetry. Two women, one is the sun and the moon. Can't have both-that's your final message.
Complex Shiann CurrieLess than a minute ago Seemingly complex but very well formed. I had to reread a couple parts due to my personal lack of understanding but it was very interesting. I loved the sun/moon comparison! Beautiful
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It makes difference If availed chance