Sunday, January 6, 2008

It’s Not Too Late Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m lost and lonely in this place,
Burrowing through the earth of forgetfulness
And making weary, slow steps
Through the unending maze
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Uriah Hamilton
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Ramesh Rai 26 September 2014

We all are longing for something for some days. A poignant write.

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Alison Cassidy 18 January 2008

Sweet melancholy - a poem of longing and hope. I agree with Sandra about the last stanza. Images of long ago brought to life by a skillful pen. Excellent piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 09 January 2008

A longing for what was, but may never quite be again. The last stanza is especially poignant. Take care, my gifted friend. Warm regards, Sandra

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Finely structured, full of promise along with the regret. Gorgeous yet so sad. t x

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