It Sounded Like Poem by Sandra Osborne

It Sounded Like

Rating: 3.9


It sounded like
You said “I Love You”
It sounded like
A waterfall.

It sounded like
You were so truthful,
It sounded like,
You heard my call.

It sounded like
A warming sunshine,
The completing circle
Circling me.

It sounded like
Paradise was mine,
It sounded like
You set me free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine Magee 29 March 2005

A beautiful lilting rhythm. This is lovely, Sandra. Chrissie

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Michael Shepherd 29 March 2005

Such a music to it...

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I envy your talent. Again, an inspired poem. -war

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Renee Lewis 29 March 2005

the simplicity and the easy way it flowed is what caught my attention and yet it conveyed a powerful thought...i really liked it.

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Aila El-Edroos 28 March 2005

I like it. Sounds true and honest. Simple yet emphatetic. I think almost everyone has ever been in that kind of experience.

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