Friday, June 19, 2015

It Was Raining... Comments

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The omnipresent sky,
Elucidated but pallid,
Tranquil but unpredictable,
Jigs and jives;
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ARUNIMA ROY THAKER
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Chinedu Dike 26 June 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. You captured the moment very well. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 19 June 2015

A lovely poem, Arunima. Thanks for sharing

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 June 2015

Rich with vocabulary the lines flow so smooth.Loved it.Keep inking.

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