It Was Raining Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

It Was Raining



"It was raining…
and we were both standing
in the shade
waiting for the rain to calm down
we are both quiet
looking at you…
savoring every moment
that I am with you
waiting for the opportunity
to go inside your heart again…
it has always been my belief
that you are created for me alone
and not for anyone else
but then suddenly
you walked away
without saying anything
and now alone…
I stared at the pouring rains
watching it fall
and just like these rains
it will take a long time
to ease the pain in my heart."

Wednesday, July 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2017

Standing in shed and waiting for rain gives amazing effect in mind. This is a great poem with pleasing imagery presented about rain. This is very well crafted and shared....10

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Thank you Mr Kumarmani Mahakul, its so pleasing to read comments like this. really appreciate a lot.

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