Jesus James Llorico

Walk With Me - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

An empty road.... this peaceful night....
As evening breeze, blend with street lights

Though far are we, from city's glow
With only dunes and sands to show

Come, be with me, my fairest one
Let us walk this road, hand in hand

Then we will talk about the time
When we were young and in our prime

The crescent moon up in the sky
Will spread radiance for you and I

Tell me then, that moment arise
First time we meet, love in our eyes!

While this divine and gentle wind
Just lightly brush your lovely skin

Whisper me then, the simple truth
We're both in love, since time of youth

Our pleasant talk, gaze from afar
Your sparkling smile mix with the stars

Together we'll laugh, so much fun
The world will know that we are one!

For you and I, this walk entails
It's just seem, like some fairy tale

Though this dream, be out of the blue
I hope someday this will come true...

Comments about Walk With Me by Jesus James Llorico

  • Niken Kusuma Wardani (12/25/2015 11:51:00 PM)

    So beautiful... hope your dream come true (Report) Reply

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  • Khaoula Basty (12/25/2015 6:30:00 AM)

    I hope it will come true Nice penned :) 10 Rate :) (Report) Reply

  • Ging Taping (9/15/2014 5:39:00 AM)

    Full of hopes...someday soon it will happen. (Report) Reply

  • (9/4/2014 2:32:00 PM)

    Simply expressing a love you hope to have in the future is very beautiful, brought tears to my eyes because it is so endearing and tender. Fantastic poem, Jesus! ! Thank you for sharing your heart. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (10/5/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Stuck with the feeling you left here..great best mark for u :) _Soul (Report) Reply

  • (9/25/2013 3:51:00 AM)

    Beautiful. bellissimo! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    Cool and interesting poem! (Report) Reply

  • (9/22/2013 2:13:00 AM)

    Inspiring beautiful artistic poem of joy and peace- -much enjoyment! .... (Report) Reply

  • (9/20/2013 11:16:00 PM)

    Great! it's a very beautiful poem...i love it (Report) Reply

  • (9/20/2013 10:59:00 PM)

    The beauty of this divine and gentle poem truly brought tears down my cheeks. (Report) Reply

  • Sj Holland (8/18/2013 4:59:00 AM)

    This is my favorite stanza:

    ...Tell me then, that moment arise
    First time we meet, love in our eyes! ...

    The last stanza was a surprise. I thought all along that it was real, until the end. I hope it did come true for you though, and believe it did.
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2013 4:56:00 PM)

    so beautiful, so tender, so romantics fused with good rhythm and flow make this poem show a honest and intense emotions (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (6/7/2013 3:25:00 PM)

    So beautiful with such delicate and graceful rhythm and flow a gentle, dreamlike write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (6/6/2013 10:15:00 AM)

    a lovely write about youth and life. Something to talk about in later years. (Report) Reply

  • Zubiya Surti (5/28/2013 10:16:00 AM)

    a very lovely poem, sir.thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 5, 2013

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